Christmas at the Scottish Lodge by Donna Ashcroft

I would like to thank Bookouture and NetGalley for yet another opportunity to discover new authors and ARCs in exchange for my honest opinion.

This year I start quite early with the winter holiday spirit, with "Christmas at the Scottish Lodge" (thanks Chiskeik for pointng that out!).

A successful romance writer and a professional skier get married behind her brother’s back, who is also the groom’s best friend. 

But after the new husband’s accident on the slopes, he distances from her. Eleven months pass and, fed up with waiting, she travels to his Scottish family lodge to get him to sign the divorce papers. They are separated after all, so what could go wrong? 

Oh, right—feelings.

Publication date: Oct 27 2025

Publisher: Bookouture

I liked it, but I can’t say I loved it. The idea has potential and there’s emotional and sexual tension between the characters. 

→ Beware of a couple of mild spoilers.

The thing is that we read and love the genre, so we already know that it will end with a big gesture that will bring them together, with forgiveness following suit. So the real deal here should be the journey, enjoying the scenery. And there, it fell short, in my opinion.

For starters, I chose this one because I visited Scotland a couple of years ago and looooved  it. So I was eager to go back there through this novel. 

My first shock was that I didn’t feel I was there—it could've been anywhere.

The Christmassy vibe was very present there, and the coziness was built thanks to the lodge, the pies and some side characters that didn’t appear as often as needed (Aunt Effie, for example, and of course, all the strays). Also, the rough dynamic between the FMC's brother and her best friend was something I would have loved to read more about. The story relies on the back-and-forth between the main couple, as it should, but their emotions were explained at every turn, becoming repetitive, so the presence of other characters felt like a relief.

However, the biggest problem I found is the dialogue. It is usually short and intense, building-up good tension, but the author inserts several lines of feelings that we already know about, between one's question and the other's reply, so it lacks fluidity. I found myself skipping quite a lot of text, just to get to what they were talking about, beacause that's what interested me— not surprisingly, I read it so fast.

The emotional build-up leads to an ending that works, but Mairi is a romance writer after all, and she should know the tricks. I found that the end gesture should’ve been placed before the reconciliation— that would be what showed Mairi where his priorities lay, and then she'd turn around (you'll understand when you get there). 

I read many 4 and 5 star reviews, though, so I may be on the wrong side, but I really felt it was just "another romance story". Not bad, don't get me wrong... just not enough.

So... did you read it? What was your experience with it? How did it make you feel?

Do you think I should've waited longer to read Winter stuff? Let me read you in the comments.

Rating: ★★⯪☆☆

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